Thursday, March 15, 2012

Untold Love Story

Jacob is getting annoyed that Messie keeps on leaving a mess after she eats, and that she puts her half-eaten stuff in the fridge without a wrapper.  In addition either Jacob or the five other people have to clean it up.  The next day while she is eating he comes up and says, “why don’t you put a wrapper on your food while you put it in the fridge.”  Then Messie says, “I don’t know how to put it on well so I would just be wasting the wrappers.”  “Next time when you don’t know something you ask.”  Said Jacob.  “Next time I will.”  Said Messie.

 “Another thing could you try to be a little cleaner when you eat and can you throw away your food after a week.”  Explained by Jacob.  “Additionally why aren’t you getting mad at me like the other person that complained.”  Jacob looking confused.  “It’s because you are the leader of our dorm room.”  Messie said. “Well I kind of like you,” Messie said easily.  Then Jacob told the whole group that Messie liked him when he got in the cafeteria.  The whole group was not surprised because they keep seeing that Messie is mean to them, but not to Jacob.  

“At least now that Messie will now clean up her own mess and throw away her food if it isn’t good anymore.”  Said Jacob.  “There’s one conflict in your plan and it’s that Messie likes you now, so you better be careful and not get her angry by rejecting her.” Barry said.  Now lets head upstairs to our dorm to see what Messie is doing in the room.  When they look upstairs she wasn’t there.  Where she was at is looking for Jacob to go out with him.  Then they look downstairs outside Messie’s car was gone. Jacob was thinking that she was looking for him at their favorite coffee shop in California.  

When he got to the coffee shop she was there getting her Vanilla Roach coffee, then he gets a regular coffee and they sit together.  Then Jacob asks Messie out.  After that they kissed and drove to their dorm.         

1 comment:

  1. Solid writing, Ryne! You should post some of your Historical Fiction piece here too.

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